Untitled Haiku By Shubhodeep October 14, 2007 Black waterIn the lake today Smells like death Share Get link Facebook X Pinterest Email Other Apps Share Get link Facebook X Pinterest Email Other Apps Comments Shubhodeep said… One of the numerous pics that I received through chain-mails. Apologies to the actual author of this photograph for using it without permission. polona said… poignant and good choice of photo! Shashank said… Hi brother!I am fine.just busy pretending to be busy. Even pretensions cost so much time and effort.I am leaving for Dehradun on 20th.How are you? Anonymous said… well......bharatbharti[ above] is I- shashank Shubhodeep said… polona Thank you. bhai I am good. How long will you be there? Have fun. Rashmi Patel said… thanks for the comment on the blog! keep writing! :) Anonymous said… Powerful photoThis line in your haiku grabs me like a chokehold "smells like death."Nicely done Shubhodeep said… floots i hoped it would be rash welcome. thank you :) gel long time since i've seen you here. welcome back. a powerful image deserves powerful words. hopefully i've managed to compliment the pic. Jo said… You have a beautiful way with words. I still can't believe you're so young. What a good start in life you have! Shubhodeep said… josie >> most kind of you. thanks :) Reeta Skeeter said… And i love the lines at the end of ur blog by Vikram Seth :) Sue hardy-Dawson said… chilling words and the picture works so well Sue hardy-Dawson said… . J. Andrew Lockhart said… very nice! glad you visited my photo blog. come see http://jamesalockhart.blogspot.com I'll definitely be back! Janice Thomson said… Very vivid phrasing that takes me a couple different places. Shubhodeep said… sue >> thanks for your commentandrew >> i'll be right over :)janice >> welcome and thanks :) get zapped said… Very powerful piece! Good combo with photo. Shubhodeep said… zap >> welcome, thanks Anonymous said… Chilling indeed. Shubhodeep said… aurora >> thanks for visiting
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I am fine.just busy pretending to be busy. Even pretensions cost so much time and effort.
I am leaving for Dehradun on 20th.
How are you?
Thank you.
bhai
I am good. How long will you be there? Have fun.
This line in your haiku grabs me like a chokehold "smells like death."
Nicely done
i hoped it would be
rash
welcome. thank you :)
gel
long time since i've seen you here. welcome back. a powerful image deserves powerful words. hopefully i've managed to compliment the pic.
I'll definitely be back!
andrew >> i'll be right over :)
janice >> welcome and thanks :)